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Wednesday 29 July 2020

WRITING FOLLOW UP

In the deep dark woods there was a witch 

Making the kids eat a delicious biscuit

To get them fatter so she could eat them.


But she had to come up with good concoction  for them to eat. She made a new concoction every second to get him fatter.


they made  sweet and salty concoctions every second to feed the kids . They were in a sharp gnarly cage; she was so skerd.


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