This week  it writing  we have been editing and   making sintense better.
Thes  are some sintense i have done.

Cybersmart - How To Make Your Blog More Interesting

When Ruby goes and writes her blog she should use good punctuation and make the story more exciting. Use  full stops at the end of sentences and  capital letters and  when it is someone's name or a place. Just like when Ruby spells her name, she needs to put  a capital letter because it is a name. If she was saying she was from Africa, she would need to put a capital letter because it is a place. All places need a capital letter. 

When ruby says wants to put lots of words  together instead of using the word and a whole bunch of ands, you put a comma between the words. 

The Visitors Gadget lets you know when people are looking at your blog.

The Recent Comments will show you the last comment that was made on your blog. You can see who commented on your blog and what it said.

Here you go Ruby, I hope this helped you to post on your blog.