When Ruby goes and writes her blog she should use good punctuation and make the story more exciting. Use full stops at the end of sentences and capital letters and when it is someone's name or a place. Just like when Ruby spells her name, she needs to put a capital letter because it is a name. If she was saying she was from Africa, she would need to put a capital letter because it is a place. All places need a capital letter.
When ruby says wants to put lots of words together instead of using the word and a whole bunch of ands, you put a comma between the words.
The Visitors Gadget lets you know when people are looking at your blog.
The Recent Comments will show you the last comment that was made on your blog. You can see who commented on your blog and what it said.
Here you go Ruby, I hope this helped you to post on your blog.
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Kia ora Charlie,
ReplyDeleteYou have given Ruby some great ideas on how to write a quality blog post plus what gadgets she should have on her blog. I think Ruby will find these tips and tricks very helpful.
Thank you for sharing Charlie.
:) Sharon - Te Ara Tūhura Education Programme Leader
Great post Charlie, I like that you have showed that you know about capitals and full stops. Which gadgets do you have on your blog?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Charlie I think this is a great blog post, I like the way you helped Ruby out and I loved the ruby picture you made. overall it's an amazing blog post and I enjoyed reading it. from Lincoln
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