This week  it writing  we have been editing and   making sintense better.
Thes  are some sintense i have done.

Cybersmart - How To Make Your Blog More Interesting

When Ruby goes and writes her blog she should use good punctuation and make the story more exciting. Use  full stops at the end of sentences and  capital letters and  when it is someone's name or a place. Just like when Ruby spells her name, she needs to put  a capital letter because it is a name. If she was saying she was from Africa, she would need to put a capital letter because it is a place. All places need a capital letter. 

When ruby says wants to put lots of words  together instead of using the word and a whole bunch of ands, you put a comma between the words. 

The Visitors Gadget lets you know when people are looking at your blog.

The Recent Comments will show you the last comment that was made on your blog. You can see who commented on your blog and what it said.

Here you go Ruby, I hope this helped you to post on your blog.

The 8 Beatitudes

In the lockdown I made  two ramps.

One ramp is small and one is big. First we put the ramp on the steps and rode up it.We wanted to jump off the big ramp on the street but we decided it was  too steep. We made the ramp less steep by cutting off the top two planks. We tried it out. It was epic!

math follow up poster.

This is my math follow up
poster.

Reading follow up

My goal for reading was to find one inportint idea and justify wey it in inportint.

I read this artcle about jacaranda ar

One important idea:

She worked for the British prime minister tony blair.

Why is this important?

In the future jacaranda wanted to work in politics this job gave her experience.

PBL Kid Zone Project

For P.B.L this term we have been working in group's for the kid zone project.
My group have made a Nerf gun shooting rang. We had to collaborate with a small group to make the game. During this P.B.L I have  showed collaboration by...
- Working to each other's strengths I helped build the project.
- Most of us work well when we where making the decisions.
- When we had to make decision about the boxes  colour we all got one box.
My goal for next time is going to talk to my group more.

This is my prototype.